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Should have let some of us have a look at it first, 😉
Only got to the bottom of the very first column on the first page,
Durability ‘you buy and ISE branded product.’ Should be an.
End of life responsibility ‘these two were both in houses which we flooded’ 😯 Should be were.Same section. ‘recondition it and it available’ missing make between and & it.
I will give a good looking at and let you know of any more, hopefully before the next print run. 😉
Jim.
Re: New brochure,
You ain’t seen nothing yet ,Debbie has been going through it and it aint a pretty sight – highlighter everywhere.
She even e-mailed Ken 😆 now he knows what I have to put up with .
LawrenceRe: New brochure,
Debbie is OK by me, I have my lovely pink highlighter in my hand at this very moment. 😆
Jim.
EDIT. I got five on the first page alone, what was Debbies score?
Re: New brochure,
iadom wrote:
EDIT. I got five on the first page alone, what was Debbies score?She says first page 19,will do the rest tomorrow at the hospital with our eldest.
LawrenceRe: New brochure,
i am sorry we did our best the errors will be corrected if we ever re print them
if you dont like them dont use them
john
Re: New brochure,
I know there was a few spelling errors but, believe it or not, that is exactly the same text as has been on the downloadable version for the past couple of months and nobody sussed. 😉
They will get sorted on reprint but I thought that it was more important to get them quickly than mess about proofing fully as we needed them for the new 5 arriving.
K.
Re: New brochure,
The brochures look fine, already given out a couple and will use all of the others.
It is a fact however that so many glaring mistakes do detract somewhat from an otherwise excellent visual layout.
Lets just call it another step on the learning curve. 😉
Jim.
Re: New brochure,
Sorry John ,no offence meant.
The brochure works as the customers have something to look at and it backs up the Ise story that I tell them as well.
It also proves to them that there is a range of products available to suit most pockets (I just want some deeper ones in my area 😆 )
I was telling ken today I seem to sell more “2’s” than anything else at the moment ,And as the ultimate in product endorsement my mother in law now has one !.
Regards
LawrenceRe: New brochure,
Lawrence wrote: ,And as the ultimate in product endorsement my mother in law now has one !.
And in the back of my car is an ISE 2 that is on its way tomorrow morning to my daughters flat in Manchester. 8)
kwatt wrote:I know there was a few spelling errors but, believe it or not, that is exactly the same text as has been on the downloadable version for the past couple of months and nobody sussed
Ahh, but you didn’t ask us to have a look at it via the ‘word count’ thread, 😉 I hadn’t read it until I got the hard copy yesterday.
Jim.
Re: New brochure,
I could do with some brochures too but my pet hate is anything with a pile of spelling mistakes. It would just seem very amateurish and as someone has already said it does distract the reader from the product.
I do think it should have been checked before being printed. Is there some way of downloading it and then sorted the printing errors before printing?
Re: New brochure,
The simple fact of it is that I didn’t have the time to check absolutely everything. And, whilst there are a few errors I grant you, they aren’t exactly earth shattering IMO and don’t affect the message being delivered. 😉
The next thing is there is only 1000 of these as we knew there would be changes to be made.
Then we had the ironic pressure of time to get them out there since you lot have been screaming for them! 😆
The next thing now is I’m getting harassed to do press stuff, leave behinds, brochure rewrite, new product tech info, website updates and God only knows what else and everyone wants something or one thing over the other stuff.
Yes Mark I will send you some and I’ll get some up to you as well Barrie, they really aren’t that bad as, from the way that this paints it, it looks as if it’s filled with mega glaring highlighted in lights errors.
S’ok, it will be fixed on the next print run but for now, at least they are available.
K.
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