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It’s always worth winding you up! 😀
To be fair though, those are from the P&G labs and I have come across that problem before. It was one of those, niggling back of the head, this is wrong things and I honestly didn’t recall it until I was re-writing all that stuff and then the light bulb came on.
K.
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kwatt wrote:then the light bulb came on.
You take it easy now, I don’t want you to burn out 🙂
Another one for you to deconstruct. Again I’m just gobbing off for fun. 🙂
K.
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A couple of bits to tidy up. 😉
On the first line, it would scan better as, ‘appliance repair was a far’ rather than ‘repairs’In the Magic section, Manufacturing process have gotten better ? would look much neater as Manufacturing processes have improved ?
Next to bottom line in Magic section, you need a , between quality and many
In the next paragraph, this line, we apparently need taught would be better as, we need to be taught,
There are also a couple of on that should be one in that section.
Jim.PS. I see you still haven’t changed the one I mentioned on the ISE home page, pirates indeed. 😆
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One about the monthly insurance
That dude earlier reminded me about it, it still needs work methinks but it’s a start and at least we can point to it.
Comments, things missing or whatever?
K.
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Humph. 😥 You haven’t changed any of the ones in the last one yet. 😉
And the ISE homepage still has” ARRE” on it. 😆 hence my joke about the pirates, obviously that fell on stony ground. 😥
Jim.
Err, probably, like now I’ve looked at while getting the kids sorted for bed and thought, “I’ll get back to that…” then forgot. 😉
I’ll try to remember to do it in a bit, after I get the kids packed away for the evening.
K.
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Updated this one with an extraction chart that I reconstructed from figures I now have.
Makes for interesting reading and hopefully will shed some light for the trade never mind public.
K.
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Forgive me if I am being a bit thick Ken, but isn’t the first bar chart the wrong way round????
Also just above ‘The Conclusion’ you have written 1800 rpm & 200 rpm.
Jim.
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It shows the moisture level left after the spin on the first chart. Perhaps better explanation is required. 😕
Mistake I’ll correct.
K.
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Yep, re read it in the small print, it does appear as though the that is the amount of water ‘extracted’ though.
Jim.
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No really a word count, but surely an error, front page news has Fisher & Paykel as an Aussie company, surely they are a New Zealand company?
Jim.
Go on then Jim, do you worst with this one which is updated with new info. 😆
Bet half the trade hasn’t a clue about that stuff either. 😕
K.
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