Word Count

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  • #191583
    kwatt
    Keymaster

    Re: Word Count

    And another one…

    I got fed up answering the same stuff again. πŸ˜•

    K.

    #191584
    Penguin45
    Participant

    Re: Word Count

    Very good……..

    “you lose bit time on the detergent cost” – big time?
    “washed professionally and a professional cleaners” – at a professional..?
    “if you are prepare to accept” – prepared?

    Chris.

    #191585
    kwatt
    Keymaster

    Re: Word Count

    This one may be handy and save us explaining sealed tanks over and over again.

    K.

    #191586
    iadom
    Moderator

    Re: Word Count

    I’m sure I read on the boards that the latest Bosch (Balay) production now has a sealed tub.

    Adding their name to the list would shock one or two people.

    jim.

    #191587
    kwatt
    Keymaster

    Changed to reflect that, I hadn’t picked up on that one. πŸ˜‰

    K.

    #191588
    iadom
    Moderator

    Re: Word Count

    Knew I’d seen it somewhere.

    Sealed tub

    #191589
    kwatt
    Keymaster

    Excellent, ta.

    K.

    #191590
    kwatt
    Keymaster

    Re: Word Count

    Here you go Jim, another one for you to spot my deliberate poor English in. πŸ˜†

    I was quite shocked when I looked into that BTW, it’s utterly staggering what you can get away with legally as a manufacturer and it’s how Hotpoint and Hoover are getting away with the “Made In UK”.

    K.

    #191591
    iadom
    Moderator

    Re: Word Count

    πŸ˜† Only found this one, EU legisltion

    Good article notwithstanding. 8)

    I think the first line could do with a little tweaking.

    With many appliance and parts now made in as cheap as possible this article explains why there is a lot deception over where they come from

    To ….With many appliances and parts now made as cheap as possible, this article explains why there is a lot of deception over where they come from.


    People have a nasty habit of seeking out the lowest possible price, be it on a part or a new appliance and the result of that is manufacturers that will provide for the requirement.

    The end of that sentence does not make sense.

    #191592
    kwatt
    Keymaster

    Sorted, ta.

    K.

    #191593
    iadom
    Moderator

    Re: Word Count

    I haven’t finished yet πŸ˜‰

    Harsh isn’t it? But it is also true; it’s our fault as people in the UK, Europe and the USA demand lower priced goods and buy products solely price.We find a lot of people going out their

    Needs an on before price and of before their.

    bit that can be paired away then, that’s what they will do to hit a price point.

    Should be pared.

    You haven’t altered all of the mistakes in the first line. two punctuation marks still missing, and you still have ‘in as cheap as possible’ which doesn’t scan either.

    #191594
    kwatt
    Keymaster

    You can’t punctuate the header, it borks the dbase. πŸ™

    Others sorted.

    K.

    #191595
    iadom
    Moderator

    Re: Word Count

    With many appliances and parts now made in as cheap as possible this article explains why there is a lot of deception over where they come from

    Still says, ‘made in as cheap as possible’ it should be made as cheap as possible. πŸ˜‰

    #191596
    kwatt
    Keymaster

    Re: Word Count

    Another one which may be useful to point people at on occasion to save explaining it, over and over again. :rolls:

    K.

    #191597
    Penguin45
    Participant

    Re: Word Count

    Very good. Sent you something.

    Chris.

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